Thread:MyrrSenpai/@comment-27041652-20151104035241/@comment-26253463-20151104041120

The thing that I like about your fanfic is that it brings up characters that nobody remembers like Abby and giving them a bigger role. You bring up unique concepts like being trapped in the amulet, and the cliff hangers that leave the reader ready for more.

You might want to avoid plot holes and making invincible characters, every well developed character has weaknesses and strengths.

And thanks for reading my fanfic. I appreciate it.