Thread:X343xSurvivalist/@comment-207.228.78.209-20151005015024

It would be awesome if i got some help on that, as it's the first one I wrote, and I don't want to make stupid Mistakes, or get information wrong, so yah. I did change the "Yo, and Yah" Cause i guess it sounds better without that, also cause of the time period, but i just wrote this all in one go, and I am reaaaallllyyyy slowly picking things out and editing them. So yah!  